CommunicationSeptember 29, 20264 min

How to write a chamber newsletter members actually read

Most chamber newsletters are lists. The ones members open every week lead with one thing, name names, and ask for one thing.


Most chamber newsletters are written on Wednesday night by someone who has already had a full day. The result is predictable: a list of events, a line welcoming several new members, three asks stacked at the bottom, and a sign-off. Members skim it for the one date they need and close it.

The newsletters people open every week do a few things differently, and none of them take more time.

Lead with one thing

Pick the single item you most need people to act on this week and put it first, even if something more pleasant is competing for the top. If volunteer signups for the fall market close Friday and you are forty people short, that is your opening sentence, with the number in it.

Everything else in the issue can be brief because the reader already knows why they opened it.

Name the businesses and the people

"Welcome to several new members" tells nobody anything. "Welcome to Blue Heron Outfitters on River Street and Fair Haven Family Dental" gives two owners a reason to forward the email, and tells every other member who just joined.

The same goes for member news. An anniversary, a new hire, an expansion: say who, and say what.

Put the date, time and place on every event

Every event mention needs all three, every time, even if you listed it last week. People read newsletters out of order and on their phones. If a detail is missing when you write the issue, mark it and fill it in before you send rather than leaving it vague.

Make one ask

If you ask members to register, renew, RSVP and submit a nomination in one issue, most will do none of them. Choose the most urgent ask and give it its own short paragraph. Fold the rest into a single line.

Keep the format steady

Members learn where things are. If the calendar is always third and member news is always last, they find what they need quickly. Changing the layout every week costs attention you do not have to spend.

Write it the way you talk

A chamber newsletter goes out under a person's name. It should sound like someone in town wrote it. Skip the words that only appear in marketing copy and write the sentence you would say at the counter.

If the newsletter is the thing that keeps getting written at night, Civitas writes the weekly issue from a few bullet points, in your format.

Your next newsletter is due Thursday.

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